This is very, very cool. The composition is excellent. And I didn't read the description so I didn't even realize it was going to be metal. But all the VSTs are frankly sub-par for the level that you're composing on. I think this would sound very cool on EastWeat/Quantum Leap's Ministry of rock or OrangeTreeSamples' Evolution Strawberry Guitar. The strings were just bad. I mean, you did very good, but the VST just wasn't keeping up. :\
Anyways, I'd appreciate if you'd look at my music too if you care to. Thanks for the nice track. :3