I loved the minuscule change between the first and second half of the third measure. I know what it is, I just don't know what it's called. It fits so well. And it loops well, but it's just a loop. n.n;
I loved the minuscule change between the first and second half of the third measure. I know what it is, I just don't know what it's called. It fits so well. And it loops well, but it's just a loop. n.n;
A 4.5. It's very well done. Very excellent. But it's not anything.. particularly new to me? There's nothing wrong with it. I don't know if I could do any better in the video game genra, either. But It's not absolutely amazing. The production is great, though. :P
Oh! Yeah, it's not any great shakes melody wise. :3 But thank you so much for noticing the production quality. I worked pretty hard on it and I do take pride in making it sound A+.
I don't think that I could have possibly woke up to something more perfect this morning. What a snuggly song for a snuggly morning. c:
I am a snuggly person so I'm glad the track came off as snuggly c: Thank you for the kind review!
I just came here to point out bad advice. Frutiy Loops is good. Very good. Fruity loops sounds good. If it's what you have, then use it. It's one of my favorite DAW's.
The song, by the way, is focusing too much on the sounds and not enough on the musical content. Think about having a pretty melody before having a pretty tone. :3
Nearly a year later. Yeah, this one....the "melody" was inspired by another song that's very simple. I love that song but listening to this now. I agree. It's shit. I should delete it, but I like your comments so...
Okay. Firstly. You need to cite the source of your loops if you didn't make them. Unless, that is, you bought the loops with a license to use them commercially. That's a fluke that a lot of newbies make.
No worries though. It was nice.
If you want my honest opinion on how to improve, I would tell you to stop playing with loops. Loops won't teach you to be a musician. They won't give you any experience with musical theory.
If you don't want to have music theory, then I guess that's cool. But meh.
I think the track was a bit too repetitive. But It was cool sounding. The vocal cut offs were too sudden, I think, for the track's style.
I do think you should check out my own house song. It think it's a strikingly similar style to yours. n.n
It's still a better love story than twilight. If that's any consolation. ._.
That's the best and most accurate response I've ever got.
I wanted a drum break to drop in this so badly. You have no idea. I think I'm going to download it and add one myself. :3
Thanks :D
It's so pretty. :'D
That's all. c:
Thankyou very much!
No thanks
Female
I've already got one
Maybe.
Computer, obviously.
Joined on 7/20/12